Please Rate my Yu-Gi-Oh deck and help me improve it?

The deck looks good to me. The only problem I am having with it are the 2 Autonomous Action Unit. I feel like you are trying too much with it. You'll find that wasting 3000 LPs might be way too much to pay to sac for a Monarch. It'll be even worse towards the end of the game when you are under 1500 LPs and can't use it or draw it and it becomes a dead draw. The Ojama Trio is another iffy card for me as it seems out of place. See if you can get a Spell Striker because he is an easy special summon and tribute for your Monarchs. Also see if you can get a Fiends Sanctuary which is another easy special summon of a token for a sacrifice for your Monarchs. Also try to add 1 or 2 more Monarchs if you can to raise your chances of drawing them. I would give you the decklist of my Monarch deck, but I have to get ready for a tournament for today. Wish me luck and I hope I helped you a little.